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Just some sketches I managed to do. Trying to get better at dynamic/action poses. Since Of 2 Minds ([link]) is a shojo story, I usually don't have to try this type of stuff. It's good practice. Any suggestions for other action poses or a tutorial on how to do them?

Jean Grey, Rogue and Cyclops. These guys were drawn from memory, so don't shoot me because I missed a detail in their costume, ok?
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wonderful actiony poses! great line work as well :)

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thanks! (love your icon XD)

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Pretty cool overall. Rogue looks the most intimidating of the three, what with how she's flying towards you ready to punch your lights out.

Actually, you did really well with the two action poses for Rogue and Cyclops; you know what both are doing (or about to do) and the proportions for both are good; no body parts too large or too small for where they are in relation to the viewer.

But why does it look like Jean Grey has metal cones for her breasts? I know that latex/PVC suits like to conform a lot and reflect light, but it seems slightly out of place on her (the shape of her chest, I mean). Perhaps she's got on some type of special bra?

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Yay - looks awesome! Great Rogue! :D
Ah....shiny cone bewbs...Maybe I could do those better next time. But ya know...she really could be wearing anything you want to imagine under all that latex/spandex.

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That's true. I assumed she was just wearing some type of Adamantium-laced bra in an attempt to protect herself in all of her battles.

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Holy Jeebus, Woman! The effortless amount of detail you added to this amazes me. Over and over. You got talent like something I can't describe. The anatomy's great too.

If anything the poses are a bit stiff. Try exaggerating the foreshortening more, overstate your motion, and don't be afraid to let the drawing look 'wrong' and ugly just as long as it's moving.

My :twocents:

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Thanks Dream, I can always count on you for a good critique. I'll keep trying. Maybe I could study some comic books...haven't done that for awhile.

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